Saturday, June 12, 2010

My hobby

My favorite hobby is jogging through the parks of "Lo Cañas" to enjoy fresh air, exercise and relax. Approximately four years ago I practice and although lately I have not been able to do for lack of time, helps me feel physically healthy and energized! I started with my dad and sometimes I go out with my brother.

I like to run mainly in the summer evenings when the air is fresh.

When I run I do three times a week for about an hour.

"Lo Cañas" is a place near my house, which is characterized by green areas, trees and many people gather there to go out biking, jogging or walking. It is a place where children gather to play football.

I think it's important to practice a sport for a healthy life as this can relax, lose weight, keep fit and many more benefits!

When I run, I do so with appropriate clothing and comfortable shoes, a bottle of water to refresh and nothing else! this is a positive feature of running that is a sport that all economic and can be made! The good thing about going to this place, is the contact with nature which allows for a huge mess and wants to continue playing sports.

Finally, I do push-ups and exercises to prevent muscle injury, took a deep breath and little water to go back to my house and when I'm there I settle to rest or sleep for a moment, as it is very tiring. I would like to return to practice during winter break to relax the exhaustion of the university!

1 comment:

  1. Good, Karina.

    Some comments:

    It´s important that you don´t omit subjects and verb objects, for example, "Approximately four years ago I practice and although lately I have not been able to do IT for lack of time,IT helps me feel physically healthy and energized! I started with my dad and sometimes I go out with my brother".

    Additionally, you can express porpuse by saying, "I think it's important to practice a sport (for) TO HAVE a healthy lifeSTYLE AND as A WAY TO (this can) relax, lose weight,AND TO (keep fit) (and many more benefits!)

    CHECK PARALLEL STUCTURE AT

    Finally, you DO sports and running is cheap.

    2 points.

    Paula

    http://www.evergreen.edu/writingcenter/handouts/grammar/parallel.pdf

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